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Chaos

Title: Chaos
Author: tifaching
Prompt: #2  at the April Showers Drabbleathon at  [info]day_by_drabble
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam Winchester, Ruby
Genre: Gen'
Rating: PG
Word count: 100
Summary:  Ruby's taken Sam a long way.



 

He's nearly ready.

Ruby smiles as Sam reaches out- eyes cold and hard.  He pulls the demon from its host, consigns it to eternal oblivion and his face shows only triumph.  No guilt or pain- he’s so much stronger now.

Ruby’s triumph is even greater, but she keeps that to herself.  The lost, broken man she’d dragged from his cocoon all those months ago has grown, fed on the sweet nectar of anger and revenge, nourished by the power of her blood.

When her butterfly flaps his wings, it will bring more than chaos.  It will bring hell on earth.

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[personal profile] dante_s_hell 2011-04-09 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice!

[identity profile] lylithj2.livejournal.com 2011-04-09 06:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh hell! That was brilliant!

[identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com 2011-04-09 09:36 pm (UTC)(link)
What a direction to take this prompt! Very effective!

[identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com 2011-04-09 09:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh shit...oh hell, woman!! This was gorgeous!!

*hugs you hard*

[identity profile] louisem27.livejournal.com 2011-04-09 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
WOW!!!

Just....Wow!

You do know that even as dark as these are I just love them.

Hugs

[identity profile] minebellatilli.livejournal.com 2011-04-09 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Loved your insight into Ruby's evil mind. Butterfly indeed.

[identity profile] nwspaprtaxis.livejournal.com 2011-04-10 06:52 pm (UTC)(link)
OH MY GOD! THIS IS BRILLIANT! I LOVE THIS!

And you totally have Ruby's voice DOWN.

I especially love this line When her butterfly flaps his wings, it will bring more than chaos. It will bring hell on earth. So, so, so totally S4!RUBY.

[identity profile] debbiel66.livejournal.com 2011-04-10 07:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Your ending packs such a punch. Guh.

[identity profile] tahirire.livejournal.com 2011-04-10 07:46 pm (UTC)(link)
This is AWESOME! Love the imagery and the use of chaos theory. So good! *saves*

[identity profile] selecasharp.livejournal.com 2011-04-11 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
This is a really awesome interpretation of that prompt, bb! It gives me shivers, seeing how you got into her head here. Oh, Ruby, if only I hadn't hated your actress, hehe. Great job!

[identity profile] abeautifullie3.livejournal.com 2011-04-11 12:59 am (UTC)(link)
Holy Shit! (or unholy, rather) This is...I can feel it.
Yeah, this one goes to the place where it's beyond a mere comprehension of words. This packs a physical punch.
ext_3554: dream wolf (cupcake)

[identity profile] keerawa.livejournal.com 2011-04-11 04:05 am (UTC)(link)
Very nice job capturing Ruby here, with her pride and very real, if fairly fuckd-up, affection for Sam and all his possibilities.

Also - happy birthday! Here, have a cupcake!

[identity profile] cece-away.livejournal.com 2011-04-27 06:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Stunning phrases. I'm always so impressed when a writer can give so much within an economy of words. That's hard.
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